Mine en Scene is about communicating certain messages to the audience using what's in the frame. This could be using setting & props, costume, hair & make-up, character's facial expressions & body language, lighting & colour and the positing of characters within the scene.
The setting and props are important. Setting is where it all takes place, it sets the atmosphere. A lot can be communicated just from the background. For example, a desert for a western is very stereotypical. This is because typically it's looked at as a place where heroes are made and villains tend to rule, until of course the hero rises up against them. In contrast to a city scape where there could be multitude of characters, the way it's communicated would now depend on lighting what part of the city we see. However, a city scape is normally looked as the concrete jungle, it's difficult to get to the higher end of society there and so we are ofter positioned with characters that we see fighting there way up.
The props a character has can also tell us things about the character or even the area or situation they're in. For a upper-class woman, it could be an expensive handbag, using colours such as gold on the zips and things. This would discretely communicate that the character is wealthy and probably wants everyone to know, as they're showing it off with the handbag. Other props could be in the background, a character doesn't have to carry them. A good example of this is in Alfred Hitchcock's "Psycho" in the parlour scene. Marion is sitting behind a large pitcher of milk. Though she doesn't drink any of the milk, we can relate the pitcher to herself. The pitcher is a white colour, which depicts innocence and purity, telling us about Marion's current mental state. yet the shape is curvy and smooth which we can associate with the body shape of Marion, it's almost planting seeds for what's later to come, when we later see her exposed in the shower.
Costume, hair and make-up can tell us about the character and their personality. Depending on the costume, we can see if they're upper, lower or middle class. We can also see if they're neat or messy depending on the state of their clothes.
The hair can tell us about their mental state and personality. We can see a character decent into insanity just from their state of their hair getting progressively messier into the film. It's not always insanity that messy hair indicates in movies. In Skyfall, Bond is lost in himself and doesn't seem to be in his best state, physically and mentally. His hair is messy and his facial hair is unshaven, before he begins to fix himself and straightens up, and his hair becomes neater as he does so.
Make-up can be used in a variety of ways, from discretely making a character's face pale or light to openly using eye shadow or lipstick. The type of style the make-up is used in will tell the audience about the type of character. If red lipstick is on a female character it can show the flirtatiousness of her. Alternatively is could be luscious or even evil. Maybe all three. Make-up can be used to make a character look tired or bursting with life. Using this can be extremely useful to communicating the character's well being to the audience.
Facial expression & body language are straight forward ways of telling an audience about a character. Though it can be hard getting an actor to play the character exactly how the director wants them. The focus on the facial expressions and body language (as with everything) depends on how the director uses the camera. So emphasis can added or lessened with different angles and shots, such as a close-up.
The lighting and colour and highly important for mise en scene. This is because with different colours, different messages are communicated. E.g. Red=lust or anger, purple=wealth, mystery or frustration, black= Evil or sadness and white=innocence or purity. There are other meaning for those colours also, but those are some of the main ones.
Lighting can completely change a scene. A lot of backlight can create a silhouette, often used in noir films because it's very dark. A lot of key light and filler can create a happier atmosphere, often used in rom-coms.
The positioning of a character is crucial. It can tell the audience how close they are mentally by portraying it physically. If they're mentality far apart they might be on opposite sides of a diner table, like in American Beauty or this scene in the TV series Breaking Bad.
If a character is standing on a step or something that makes that character higher up than others, then the one on the step could be in a higher class or financial or spiritually higher state than the others.
Friday, 21 December 2012
Thursday, 13 December 2012
Feedback On My Script
This time we pre-prepared drafts for our film openings so that we could give and receive feedback on each others work. These drafts used the correct spacing, font and layout.
The positive point for my draft of "SHOT" were:
-Good opening to hook viewers.
-Good characters.
-Gave a detailed image of what was happening in the scene, at points.
-Fits the genre it's supposed to.
Points to improve were:
-Lack of Mise-en-Scene.
-Need a better understanding of the relationship between the characters.
How I plan to improve:
-The mise-en-scene can be improved easily. It wasn't that I'd forgotten to include it, I had just forgotten to write about it in the script. The're multiple ideas I have concerning communicating information about the characters to the audience. An example of things I plan to have with-in frames with characters are pictures with relevant images, televisions with relevant images, clothing colour and possibly religious symbols near or on them at points.
-As for the relationship between characters, I believe that just from reading the script it was unclear of who they were in relation to each other. Hopefully, when I have produced the opening, it will be clear who they are to one another.
-Another frequent comment was 'Is there music here?" Or "Is there non-diabetic sound at this point?" Throughout I have parts which require music or non-dialectic sound. I did not include mentions of it in the script because it was a draft to get others to understand the concept.
Here is my script (The layout on my blog is not the same as the actual script layout):
RILEY IS FACING NICHOLAS, WHO HAS HIS BACK TURNED. THEY'RE STANDING 3 METRES APART.
RILEY RAISES HIS GUN AND AIMS AT NICHOLAS.
THE CAMERA PEERS OVER NICHOLAS'S LEFT SHOULDER TO VIEW RILEY.
The positive point for my draft of "SHOT" were:
-Good opening to hook viewers.
-Good characters.
-Gave a detailed image of what was happening in the scene, at points.
-Fits the genre it's supposed to.
Points to improve were:
-Lack of Mise-en-Scene.
-Need a better understanding of the relationship between the characters.
How I plan to improve:
-The mise-en-scene can be improved easily. It wasn't that I'd forgotten to include it, I had just forgotten to write about it in the script. The're multiple ideas I have concerning communicating information about the characters to the audience. An example of things I plan to have with-in frames with characters are pictures with relevant images, televisions with relevant images, clothing colour and possibly religious symbols near or on them at points.
-As for the relationship between characters, I believe that just from reading the script it was unclear of who they were in relation to each other. Hopefully, when I have produced the opening, it will be clear who they are to one another.
-Another frequent comment was 'Is there music here?" Or "Is there non-diabetic sound at this point?" Throughout I have parts which require music or non-dialectic sound. I did not include mentions of it in the script because it was a draft to get others to understand the concept.
Here is my script (The layout on my blog is not the same as the actual script layout):
"SHOT"
WRITTEN BY
BEN WOODIER
FADE IN:
EXT. FIELD - DAY - DREAM SEQUENCE
RILEY RAISES HIS GUN AND AIMS AT NICHOLAS.
THE CAMERA PEERS OVER NICHOLAS'S LEFT SHOULDER TO VIEW RILEY.
RILEY
I'M SORRY, NICHOLAS.
RILEY FIRES THE GUN. NICHOLAS FALLS OVER, DEAD. RILEY THEN PULLS THE GUN UPON HIMSELF, AIMING AT HIS CHIN. HE SQUINTS HIS FACE AS HE BEGINS SQUEEZING THE TRIGGER.
CUT TO:
INT. RILEY'S BEDROOM - MORNING
RILEY WAKES UP. HE HAS THE SAME FACIAL EXPRESSION AND IS BREATHING HEAVILY AND MILDLY SWEATING.
A MOBILE PHONE IS RINGING.
RILEY ANSWERS THE PHONE.
RILEY
HELLO?
EILIF(OVER PHONE)
IT HAPPENED AGAIN. DIDN'T IT RILEY.
A LOOK OF PANIC ENTERS RILEY. HE TURNS TO THE SIDE OF HIS BED AND PUTS THE PHONE DOWN, THEN SINKS HIS HEAD INTO HIS HANDS.
CAMERA PULLS BACK AS THE TITLE SEQUENCE FADES ONTO SCREEN.
CUT TO:
INT. RILEY'S LOUNGEH - MORNING
RILEY AND NICHOLAS ARE SITTING DOWN ON CHAIRS, FACING EACH OTHER.
NICHOLAS
I DON'T GET IT, MAN. THEY'RE JUST DREAMS, RIGHT? THEY DONT MEAN ANYTHING.
RILEY
THEY'RE NOT DREAMS... THEYRE... REAL.
NICHOLAS
REAL? HOW ARE THEY-
RILEY (INTERUPTING)
IT'S... WEIRD. THEY'RELIKE MEMORIES, MEMORIES FROM THE FUTURE.
NICHOLAS
FUTURE? DO YOU REALIZE HOW CRAZY THAT
RILEY (INTERUPTING)
I KNOW... I KNOW...
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT.STREET - DAY
NICHOLAS IS WALKING. HIS PHONE BEGINS TO RING AND HE ANSWERS.
NICHOLAS
HELLO?
EILIF(OVER PHONE)
NICHOLAS, IT'S EILIF. THERE'S BEEN A CHANGE OFF PLAN. YOU'RE... NO LONGER NECESSARY.
THE CAMERA PEERS OVER NICHOLAS'S LEFT SHOLDER TO VIEW A GUNMAN. A GUNSHOT IS FIRED.
Monday, 10 December 2012
Script Writing- Workshop
Recently, myself and others were involved in a script writing workshop. In this workshop we began by looking at a script called "Fury". We read this script and briefly analysed it to absorb the formatting and style which was later used to write drafts of our own scripts.
We learnt about how scripts and screenplays are used in the media business and how to format them in a professional style. The image below is an example of how a script should be formatted. It covers the basics and is informative as to how a screenplay/ script should be written.
The formatting within screenplays that we coovered were use of scene, slug line (or scene headings, scene direction, character cue, actor direction and dialogue.
Using what I had learnt, I was able to produce a draft for my future script of my film opening "SHOT".
We learnt about how scripts and screenplays are used in the media business and how to format them in a professional style. The image below is an example of how a script should be formatted. It covers the basics and is informative as to how a screenplay/ script should be written.
The formatting within screenplays that we coovered were use of scene, slug line (or scene headings, scene direction, character cue, actor direction and dialogue.
Using what I had learnt, I was able to produce a draft for my future script of my film opening "SHOT".
Wednesday, 5 December 2012
Psychological Thriller
For my film opening, I have chosen to work primarily with the sub-genre of psychological-thriller (As explained in my pitch). The reason I have chosen to use this genre is because I enjoy films in that genre, for example David Fincher's Fight Club (1999).
Fight Club (1999) Trailer:
The psychological-thriller genre focuses on the unstable emotional state of characters combined with mystery and thriller. Psychological thriller often involves aspects from mystery and drama genres, but can also involve traits from horror. Too many aspects from horror though can cause the film to become a psychological-horror.
The cliche of a psychological-thriller is usually the main character having to overcome an enemy using mental strength, as opposed to physical. This enemy could be another character who's using deceptive mind games to control them, or the enemy could even be an internal conflict that they must overcome. It's seen that the character will usually be in as bad mental state at the beginning and/or middle of the film, but at the end will have concurred their problem and recovered.
A back-story is used in the genre lots to be the reason why a character is mentally unstable. The back-story is revealed at one point to deepen our understanding of the story and character. This is great for plot-twists and character development.
A first person narrative is also used frequently in this genre so we see from the character's view point and enables the audience to understand the mental state and to become involved with this character. This technique can also be pared with the technique of unreliable narrator. The reason is for plot twist that make the film more exciting, psychyological and thrilling.
Fight Club (1999) Trailer:
The psychological-thriller genre focuses on the unstable emotional state of characters combined with mystery and thriller. Psychological thriller often involves aspects from mystery and drama genres, but can also involve traits from horror. Too many aspects from horror though can cause the film to become a psychological-horror.
The cliche of a psychological-thriller is usually the main character having to overcome an enemy using mental strength, as opposed to physical. This enemy could be another character who's using deceptive mind games to control them, or the enemy could even be an internal conflict that they must overcome. It's seen that the character will usually be in as bad mental state at the beginning and/or middle of the film, but at the end will have concurred their problem and recovered.
A back-story is used in the genre lots to be the reason why a character is mentally unstable. The back-story is revealed at one point to deepen our understanding of the story and character. This is great for plot-twists and character development.
A first person narrative is also used frequently in this genre so we see from the character's view point and enables the audience to understand the mental state and to become involved with this character. This technique can also be pared with the technique of unreliable narrator. The reason is for plot twist that make the film more exciting, psychyological and thrilling.
Genre
What is genre? Genre is a way of classifying movies in a way that makes it easy for the population to choose the type of film they would like to see. Genre allows directors to make a film that a niche audience can relate to. Without genre, directors would find it difficult to create a film that a majority would like to watch, this is because some genre types are larger than others, as people watch certain genres more than others, though the popular genre often depends on the fashion and values of the time, relevant to Voloshinov's theory which states of judging a piece of text based upon the time it was made.
Within genres there are certain cliches that an audience would expect to see. An example of this would be an action movie where the bad guys lose and the good guys win, a romance movie where the couple end up happily married, or a detective movie where the crimes get solved. An even more basic movie cliche is that every thing's normal, something bad happens, it gets fixed, something worse happens, it gets fixed just at the last second. The reason for this is often, the audience expects to see certain cliches in movies and genres, without them the audience is likely to feel uncomfortable or threatened, the only way to abolish this is to follow the set cliches. Although if everyone did this, all movies with a shared would be near copies. The reason they're not is because of experimental directors, like Alfred Hitchcock, he killed off one of the main characters in the middle of his famous thriller film, Psycho (1960).
Genre, in the film industry, is a way that studios and distributors can market their products to standardise or differentiate their output. This means that these companies can familiarise or un-familiarise their products with their consumers. The reason a company may release an unfamiliar product could be to attract a newer audience, this could just be to change the style, make more money from the new audience or to survive as the previous audience may be losing interest.
In the same way a media company can choose to distribute different genres of films, a director can choose to direct different genre, or experiment by combining 2 genres, like rom-com or psychological-thriller. These combine genres are sub-genres. Sub-genres can either be made purposefully or accidentally, because often a film will fit into multiple genres. An example of this would be Fight Club (1999) by David Fincher, the genres that this film covers are as follows: Thriller, Cult, Airplanes & Airports, Action, Action-Adventure, Satire, Drama, Psychological-Thriller, Black Comedy. This massive list of genres that Fight Club fits into was likely to not be intentional as it's doubtful that Fincher set to cover all of those film types. Instead it's likely that the final product fit those genres by accident. Bearing that in-mind, I assume that Fincher set himself the target to fit at least one of those genres, likely psychological-thriller, action or action-adventure. As it is very rare for a director to begin filming without an idea of the genre they would like to cover.
Genres often follow rules and cliches. These rules and cliches can however be broken and changed in an attempt to create something newer or to survive. These creations are sub-genres, they follow a similar, yet unfamiliar pattern to the genres they're made from. Without this pattern of change we would never create a newer idea that others can watch and learn from. Without the idea of genre and genre evolving the movie industry would dead. It is because of genres evolving to produce new ideas that the film industry is where it is today.
Within genres there are certain cliches that an audience would expect to see. An example of this would be an action movie where the bad guys lose and the good guys win, a romance movie where the couple end up happily married, or a detective movie where the crimes get solved. An even more basic movie cliche is that every thing's normal, something bad happens, it gets fixed, something worse happens, it gets fixed just at the last second. The reason for this is often, the audience expects to see certain cliches in movies and genres, without them the audience is likely to feel uncomfortable or threatened, the only way to abolish this is to follow the set cliches. Although if everyone did this, all movies with a shared would be near copies. The reason they're not is because of experimental directors, like Alfred Hitchcock, he killed off one of the main characters in the middle of his famous thriller film, Psycho (1960).
Genre, in the film industry, is a way that studios and distributors can market their products to standardise or differentiate their output. This means that these companies can familiarise or un-familiarise their products with their consumers. The reason a company may release an unfamiliar product could be to attract a newer audience, this could just be to change the style, make more money from the new audience or to survive as the previous audience may be losing interest.
In the same way a media company can choose to distribute different genres of films, a director can choose to direct different genre, or experiment by combining 2 genres, like rom-com or psychological-thriller. These combine genres are sub-genres. Sub-genres can either be made purposefully or accidentally, because often a film will fit into multiple genres. An example of this would be Fight Club (1999) by David Fincher, the genres that this film covers are as follows: Thriller, Cult, Airplanes & Airports, Action, Action-Adventure, Satire, Drama, Psychological-Thriller, Black Comedy. This massive list of genres that Fight Club fits into was likely to not be intentional as it's doubtful that Fincher set to cover all of those film types. Instead it's likely that the final product fit those genres by accident. Bearing that in-mind, I assume that Fincher set himself the target to fit at least one of those genres, likely psychological-thriller, action or action-adventure. As it is very rare for a director to begin filming without an idea of the genre they would like to cover.
Genres often follow rules and cliches. These rules and cliches can however be broken and changed in an attempt to create something newer or to survive. These creations are sub-genres, they follow a similar, yet unfamiliar pattern to the genres they're made from. Without this pattern of change we would never create a newer idea that others can watch and learn from. Without the idea of genre and genre evolving the movie industry would dead. It is because of genres evolving to produce new ideas that the film industry is where it is today.
Tuesday, 4 December 2012
"NOVA" Ident Plans
These picture are of the planning I did to make the "NOVA" Ident. It show a few ideas that I scraped, like having a straight zoom out through the space-like particle field, instead of the spiral one which I used. The reason I chose it to spiral is because it looked better and fitted the "O" shape easier during editing.
Sunday, 2 December 2012
Production Company Ident - Edit
This is an edited version of my previous ident. In this newer version, I've changed the name from "Nova Flicks" to just "Nova". This is because it sounds more serious and professional. I've also filled the background with particles that resemble stars, this is to better fit the space/super-nova theme. The "n", "v" & "a" now form from other particles/ stars, which represents the rest of an idea coming together, in the way the letters are formed from lots of small things coming together.
Film Opening Pitch
The "basic" story is Riley has recurring dreams of himself shooting Nicholas. Nicholas is his best friend whom he has known for ages and the pair assume they know everything about each other. Nicholas works for an organisation that betrays him for getting too close to Riley who, unknown to both of them, is a brainwashed secret assassin. The organisation is controlled by a character named Eilif. The character is named this because "Eilif" means immortal and he is in a position of power where he's untouchable. This organisation is gigantic and controls near everything, having great influence on most global issues. A small but high-up segment of this organisation is the assassins, like Nicholas. Another secret segment is the secret assassins, who're brainwashed. These secret assassins work with-in the organisation, disposing of anyone who threatens (Or appears to threaten) the secrecy of the organisation, like Nicholas.
The underlying questions the audience would ask from this film would be would be:
- "Can you trust others?" -The way Nicholas trusted Riley & Eilif.
-"Can you trust yourself?" -When Riley discovers he's been brainwashed.
-"What do you think you know?" -After Riley's mind has been opened, he questions this.
-"What do you actually know?" What Riley questions after the previous point.
-"Can you actually fully control someone/ something?" -After Riley discovers he's an assassin, Eilif wonders if he can ever fully control people or if it's just an illusion or something he can come close to but not fully achieve.
-"Can you actually achieve the goal you set or will you just accept what you've achieved?" When Riley & Nicolas find Eilif is basically untouchable in his position of power, this question becomes arises. And also this question is posed to Eilif when he realises he cannot fully control people like Riley.
Eilif could also be abbreviated to Mr. E, which sounds like "mystery". Though this could seem comical so I may not use it.
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